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Your life was pretty good.  You didn't have perfect health or a perfect job, and you didn't have a boyfriend.  What you did have, though, was an appreciation for the little things in life.

One of these was the little park near your work.  Everyday, unless it rained, you would take your lunch and eat it in the park.

Today, however, when you reached your favorite spot, you found a strange man sitting there.

He had pale pink hair and light skin splashed with freckles.  He was wearing a pink collared shirt, a purple vest, a blue bowtie, and khaki pants.  Next to him he had set a plate of cupcakes.

As soon as he spoke, you could tell that he was British.

"Oh!  Is this your spot?" He questioned.

"I can sit somewhere else.  It doesn't matter," you replied.

"Come!  Sit."

"I wouldn't want to intrude..."

"Nonsense, love.  I'm always happy to make a new friend," he said, smiling.  He patted
the ground next to him.

You sat down.

"My name's Oliver Kirkland.  What's your's, poppet?"

"I'm __________________________," you answered.

He held out the plate.

"Would you like a cupcake, ______________?"

You took a deep breath.  They looked and smelled so good.

"No, thank you," you said politely.

"Are you sure?"

"I'm sure," you insisted firmly.

He looked like he was about to cry.  "You... You don't want one?"

You sighed.  "It's not that I don't want one, Oliver, it's that I can't have one."

"Can't?"

"I'm a diabetic.  I have to really watch how much sugar I eat, or I'll get really sick.  Unfortunately, that means no cupcakes."

His expression transformed from distraught to horrified as he contemplated a life without cupcakes.  He stayed like that as you ate your lunch and as you got up to leave.

"See you later, Oliver."

He mumbled a goodbye, and you walked away.

The next day passed without incident.

When you sat down to eat the day after that, however, you heard your name being called.

"____________!"

You looked over to see Oliver Kirkland waving at you.

You waved back.

"You're just the person I wanted to see, love."

"Oh?"

"Yes, poppet.  I have something for you."

With a flourish, he pulled out a perfect pastel cupcake.

You looked up at him, confused.  "A cupcake?"

He grinned.  "It's a special cupcake!  A sugar free cupcake!  I made it just for you!"

You were stunned.  He had done this for you?

"Go ahead!" He urged.  "Try it."

You took a bite as the Brit watched attentively.

"Well?  What do you think?" He asked excitedly.

"It's... it's really good, Oliver."

His smile stretched from ear to ear.  "You like it!  Oh, poppet, that's wonderful!"

"You didn't have to do that," you mumbled, blushing.

"Oh, but I wanted to, love!" Oliver assured you.  "Everyone deserves a cupcake,
especially someone as sweet as you."

And then he leaned in for a kiss.
This is my first Reader Insert and my first time writing a 2p character.
The plot bunnies wouldn't leave me alone!
This was really strange to write because I wrote it backwards...

Please tell me what you think!

Edit: Apparently, the reader is a type 2 diabetic. Thank you to Calexy for pointing that out!

Hetalia does not belong to me!
You belong to Oliver!
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Lizardhero123 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
Cricket: :blank-stare: animated that shouldn't be possible... icing is made mostly of sugar... Oh well I just guess Ollie is a miracle worker
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:iconiloveleviackerman200:
AWWWWWWWWW!!!! OLLIEEEE!!!!!
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VeiledIridescence Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh how cute
and so sweet,
too, hehe~!
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elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
*flails arms while fangirling* Ollie is suck a sweetheart!!!! I want him as a boyfriend!!! Or a friend!!!
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!~
:iconitssofluffyplz:
Awesome story!!!~
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SailorMusic57 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist
I love this so much!
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S-wedish-Meatballs Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
((I'm pretty sure reader-chan would get sick from that kiss other than a sugar filled cupcake-
If ya know what I mean :heart: ))
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Darkness-Dreamt Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
awwww
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TerraAreli Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
perfect pick up line :D
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So true.  XD
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:iconviolet-hetalia:
Violet-Hetalia Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
*reads last words* AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWLOLWWWWWWW
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:iconsocietymember:
SocietyMember Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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KaidenLawrence Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Instead of type 2, I'm type 1 diabetic. This sucks because I have a cooking class in school and I can't eat what I cook! 
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ElizabethDChartigan Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well I DON'T HAVE a cooking class but I have a stupid class named health life......that sucks -_-
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E-Sane Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
On the second day we knew each other. If I fell for him, I'm an idiot.
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I assume you'll get to know him better later. Honestly, this was my first attempt at a reader insert, and they generally all develop quickly.
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E-Sane Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, I just saw the flaws, even though it was good, and try bugged me.
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Timeshiftingphoenix Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
I CAN'T IMAGINE LIFE WIHOUT SUGAR!
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:iconsocietymember:
SocietyMember Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Me neither...
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MixedMuttNeko-Chan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And then he leaned in for a kiss...

And then I pushed him away while riding away on a magic pony from the Motherlands singing "imma boss betch"
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL Go right ahead...
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MixedMuttNeko-Chan Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*pushes red button and sets off bomb that explodes a nearby city*... *shouts* WHAT?!??! I CAN'T HEAR YOU OVER THE SOUND OF MELTING CITY!!! AND WHO'S LOLLING??? clearly not all of the people that just exploded :D (Big Grin) 

Male!Me (Guī suǒ jīn, or 
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dinorex33 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I
LOVE
CUPCAKES.
:iconyay2penglandplz:
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:iconsocietymember:
SocietyMember Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ME
TOO.
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dinorex33 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cupcake bro! :iconoldschoolownedplz:
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:iconsocietymember:
SocietyMember Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsherlockhugplz:
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:icondinorex33:
dinorex33 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconitalyhugsjapanplz: Friends?
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:iconsocietymember:
SocietyMember Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbrohugplz: Friends.
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dinorex33 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAAAAAAAY!!! :iconsupertackleplz:
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Marshallismyking Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
I have type 1 diabetes. Ever since I was 5. I've had it for about 7 years. This story is awesome. I love it! I shall be adding it to my favorites 
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad that you like it!
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Marshallismyking Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
:)
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princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
I'm not diabetic but I might when I'm older cause I'm on the bigger side and a lot of my family is. either way cute story.
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!  I hope you stay diabetes free.  :)
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princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
me to it would really suck having to learn how to bake and cook with out sugar. I can't even make meat with out sugar, literally I make brown sugar crusted meat.
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, it wouldn't be fun. Do you like to cook?
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princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
Oh I love to cook it's so fun and I've done it since I was like 5. my dad taught me because he was the only one to cook and my mom wouldn't so he wanted me to be able to. I remember making burgers when I was so small I needed a chair to look over the stove. which is a long time ago since I'm like almost 6 feet tall now. Also I love all my knives they all love me to so I like never get cut by my knives, but I do get cut with a lot of other things like cans, plastic wrap, spoons, and cups. Pretty crazy huh.
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah.  Crazy.

I'm not much of a cook myself, but I do help my mom make dinner.  I'm glad you enjoy it.  :)
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princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
ya I especially like when someone likes what I made.
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I understand.  I really enjoy when people like my art or my violin playing.
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Deidara-Brat Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"And then he leaned in for a kiss."

And I pushed him down and stole his cupcakes while calling him a nerd and riding off on my Pokémon Huffy bike.
Because why not. It could happen.
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It certainly could. XD
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:iconawsomer-than-prussia:
I made my diabetic grandpa a sugar free cupcake.... He got sick after that..... I was a bad cook when I was four....
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure that he appreciated the thought. :)
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:iconawsomer-than-prussia:
Yeah....no....
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Too bad.  :(
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katyanne3065747 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
THAT WAS SO SWEET!!!!!!!
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SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
-checks blood sugar--reads diabetic part-
What the holy mother fudge......?!
im diabetic because my dad has it,so its genetic.
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MostlyDorkyMe Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
ME TOO! The only differencr is his is that he has towatch for high blood sugar (????)and i have towatch for low blood sugar.
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SilentLove832 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOW blood sugar?! NO WAY
Its like Paul Blart the mall cop!
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