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Your life was pretty good.  You didn't have perfect health or a perfect job, and you didn't have a boyfriend.  What you did have, though, was an appreciation for the little things in life.

One of these was the little park near your work.  Everyday, unless it rained, you would take your lunch and eat it in the park.

Today, however, when you reached your favorite spot, you found a strange man sitting there.

He had pale pink hair and light skin splashed with freckles.  He was wearing a pink collared shirt, a purple vest, a blue bowtie, and khaki pants.  Next to him he had set a plate of cupcakes.

As soon as he spoke, you could tell that he was British.

"Oh!  Is this your spot?" He questioned.

"I can sit somewhere else.  It doesn't matter," you replied.

"Come!  Sit."

"I wouldn't want to intrude..."

"Nonsense, love.  I'm always happy to make a new friend," he said, smiling.  He patted
the ground next to him.

You sat down.

"My name's Oliver Kirkland.  What's your's, poppet?"

"I'm __________________________," you answered.

He held out the plate.

"Would you like a cupcake, ______________?"

You took a deep breath.  They looked and smelled so good.

"No, thank you," you said politely.

"Are you sure?"

"I'm sure," you insisted firmly.

He looked like he was about to cry.  "You... You don't want one?"

You sighed.  "It's not that I don't want one, Oliver, it's that I can't have one."

"Can't?"

"I'm a diabetic.  I have to really watch how much sugar I eat, or I'll get really sick.  Unfortunately, that means no cupcakes."

His expression transformed from distraught to horrified as he contemplated a life without cupcakes.  He stayed like that as you ate your lunch and as you got up to leave.

"See you later, Oliver."

He mumbled a goodbye, and you walked away.

The next day passed without incident.

When you sat down to eat the day after that, however, you heard your name being called.

"____________!"

You looked over to see Oliver Kirkland waving at you.

You waved back.

"You're just the person I wanted to see, love."

"Oh?"

"Yes, poppet.  I have something for you."

With a flourish, he pulled out a perfect pastel cupcake.

You looked up at him, confused.  "A cupcake?"

He grinned.  "It's a special cupcake!  A sugar free cupcake!  I made it just for you!"

You were stunned.  He had done this for you?

"Go ahead!" He urged.  "Try it."

You took a bite as the Brit watched attentively.

"Well?  What do you think?" He asked excitedly.

"It's... it's really good, Oliver."

His smile stretched from ear to ear.  "You like it!  Oh, poppet, that's wonderful!"

"You didn't have to do that," you mumbled, blushing.

"Oh, but I wanted to, love!" Oliver assured you.  "Everyone deserves a cupcake,
especially someone as sweet as you."

And then he leaned in for a kiss.
This is my first Reader Insert and my first time writing a 2p character.
The plot bunnies wouldn't leave me alone!
This was really strange to write because I wrote it backwards...

Please tell me what you think!

Edit: Apparently, the reader is a type 2 diabetic. Thank you to Calexy for pointing that out!

Hetalia does not belong to me!
You belong to Oliver!
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!~
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Awesome story!!!~
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SailorMusic57 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist
I love this so much!
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S-wedish-Meatballs Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  New member
((I'm pretty sure reader-chan would get sick from that kiss other than a sugar filled cupcake-
If ya know what I mean :heart: ))
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Darkness-Dreamt Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
awwww
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TerraAreli Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
perfect pick up line :D
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So true.  XD
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Violet-Hetalia Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
*reads last words* AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWLOLWWWWWWW
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SocietyMember Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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KaidenLawrence Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Instead of type 2, I'm type 1 diabetic. This sucks because I have a cooking class in school and I can't eat what I cook! 
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ElizabethDChartigan Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well I DON'T HAVE a cooking class but I have a stupid class named health life......that sucks -_-
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